Sunday, May 21, 2006

Poetry?

During the tense build-up to the HSC exams, shuttling between college and classes, I started writing unstructured, hazy and confusing lines on books and notepads that I landed my hands on. I decided they could be called poems.

One very interesting thing about these ‘so-called’ poems is that I simply cannot write them when I am on a high, which most often I am. It’s only when I am in the worst of moods, only when I am stressed out that they come up. And during those times, I can simply not restrain myself from writing them.


The plea. ( One of the earliest ones I wrote.)

The sun rises with a golden mane
Yet, no hope, only pain.
When will these shackles break free?
Joy in every heart, when will we see?

Souls weeping in agony,
Is this is the power of money?
Poverty, we wish to bid u adieu,
Loosen your clutches, let go at least a few.

Millions of lives know only of despair,
Oh God! I plead that you be fair.
Suffering and afflicted many lie,
Unable to afford a humble pie.

Gnashing of teeth, losing of faith,
In love and care, must they bathe.
With Kindness, their spirits will revive,
Them mad, will happiness drive.

It is up to us the lucky ones,
To stop accumulation of wealth in tons.
Let us all be magnanimous,
And Help as we can without a fuss.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice one.

Anonymous said...

oops ...read this one after i commented the ones above

MountCleverest said...

well nice poem but cant bear the negativism...
i know u wrote them when u were down and low but still....
anyways i myself aint any good at writing poems but i am a little ok with remembering lyrics, and stuff that i like...
so like i suggested a hindi poem to you for ur latest post...
as for this post, heres my reply direct dil se

When you feel all alone
And the world has turned it's back on you
Give me a moment please to tame your wild wild heart
I know you feel like the walls are closing in on you
It's hard to find relieve and people can be so cold
When darkness is upon your door
And you feel like you can't take anymore

Let me be the one you call
If you jump I'll break your fall
Lift you up and fly away with you into the night
If you need to fall apart
I can mend a broken heart
If you need to crash then crash and burn
You're not alone

When you feel all alone
And a loyal friend is hard to find
You're caught in a one way street
With the monsters in your head
When hopes and dreams are far away and
You feel like you can't face they day

Let me be the one you call
If you jump I'll break your fall
Lift you up and fly away with you into the night
If you need to fall apart
I can mend a broken heart
If you need to crash then crash and burn
You're not alone

Because there has always been heartache and pain
And when it's over you'll breathe again
You'll breath again

When you feel all alone
And the world has turned its back on you
Give me a moment please
To tame your wild wild heart

Let me be the one you call
If you jump I'll break your fall
Lift you up and fly away with you into the night
If you need to fall apart
I can mend a broken heart
If you need to crash then crash and burn
You're not alone...


(original credits:savage garden)

Sree said...

Nice poetry....

Neetesh Rathod said...

nice one....abe tu toh chuppi rustom nikli...nice re...ur unstructure poems are so good pata nahi strucutured kitne ache honge...hahaha..keep posting...:)