Sunday, May 21, 2006

Dark Thoughts…Negativism takes over

If the truth you ever tell,
You’ll see your heaven turn to hell.
And be branded as a ‘bloody rebel’.
You cry, you scream or you yell,
Your family and friends will push you down the well.

The truth alone never triumphs,
Sure, it leaves you in the dumps.
The one who dares, the one who cares,
Is the one who always badly fares.

The world around demands you lie.
Definitely will you fly sky high.
Choose all wrongs, reject the rights.
Your life will be lit by a million lights.

So, my friends, I always say,
To make your days happy n gay,
Your conscience, your soul must u never trust.
For power, money, acceptance in the world, must you always lust.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

heh, me saw this only this only now. lemme sit and read it.

Anonymous said...

nice one

freespirit said...

Hey thanx!

Anonymous said...

Make yourself free from self at one stroke!

Like a sword be without trace of soft iron;

Like a steel mirror, scour off all rust with contrition

MountCleverest said...

ooooh! such a negative poem?
whats with u?
i would suggest you to go thru 1 of my all time favourite motivational poems,
koshish karne walo ki haar nahi hoti by harivansh rai bachchan...
a very good poem...

by the way was the choice of words like gay n lust intentional ;)

freespirit said...

Well...my friend i absolutely agree with u...i m an eternal optimist...n i am one with harivanshrai bachhan ji on dat...the poem is just a dark thought tht doesnt exist in my mind. Abt readin b/w d lines..all i can say is No ...no such hidden meanings there!

Vishal said...

This is vishal Sinha from rv college of engineering....bangalore..
as you are quite optimistic

u deserve reading my this article...

www.motivation-satisfaction.blogspot.com

Bye n take care..

MountCleverest said...

hey!
had been looking for the complete text of that poem for sometime now...
found it at last!
hav been worried abt u..where have u been?
i hope that the negative thoughts have not taken over, posting this favourite poem of mine just in case...
Koshish karne walo ki
makes me feel hopeful, anytime i am down..
hope that it does the same for you...